First off, I like your banner! It's really creative and adding that picture of Jimmy with Santa really had me smiling. At first I thought the story was a bit hectic, and then I realized it was about Jimmy. :P That boy is chaotic right down to his last nerve, so I really liked how it embodied him. I was seriously dying of laughter every time he slipped up and started cursing and when he gave the kids the deathbats I laughed for ages. My roomates think I'm crazy now. ;) I loved the ending too. Jimmy and Sienna are so crazy adorable together. :) Gah, I can't get the image of a crazy Jimmy out of my mind! xDDD Great entry love! :) <3
I literally LOL-ed when I read the Stop cursing, James! line. xD
It's kinda funny how I pictured this all happening. Jimmy getting kicked out of his family's house because he was too inappropriate. And the layout was very christmas-y. Overall great job. (:
Oh, and I think you used the wrong word. The guys were dieing of laughter it should be dying. (:
I just adore this one-shot! And no problem with the help, hon. It was totally awesome and hilarious! Thank you for writing a totally awesome one-shot! <3