The Devil's Mistress - Comments

Please update. :)

holy fuck

this is weird.
but amazing.
keep writing!

Love it! I usually read happy stories, but this is pretty interesting! Curious to see what happens next! I'm glad it's original too! I don't really like fanfics (:

love it! :D

Hey guys check out the character page :) WARNING: has pictures. I know some people like the characters to stay in their head :P. Should I change the story layout?

Amazing :D

Please Please Please write more. It is getting so good.
And also when you split the chapters about the gun, I think that was a pretty
good idea haha. It made me think that she was dead and then I had to wait
for my page to load to learn that she wasn't...

Anyway I like how you have the Human Trafficking idea and all, it really is good
to write about but hardly anyone does. Please update really really soon!

I really like this story so far. I usually don't read 'sex slave' stories, but this one seems to catch my attention. Cillian might be a total ASS, but he seems really attractive[:. Gonna sub right after this! ;D
Update when you can!<3

Question: Will I get rid of the India's friends chapter? now that i read it, it seems kind of shit XP

ouch! cliff hanger! loving it<3 really good story keep it up(=

omg keep going!

Great update..I wonder what she saw??

I actually like it (:

wow wtf?

Awesome! Got me hooked right away!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Wish they were longer xD

wow, this is different. but i like it.

Sorry everyone cannot update at the moment because my Internet is bust on my computer and I can't really update on my iPhone , I'll try but I haven't really gotten the hang of the keyboard on this thing yet...:P

when are you gonna update

cant wait for the next chapter to come out