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  • shesmywynonna

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    hahahaxD i was lmao-ing the whole time with them being drunk and high and kissing each other xD
    "I'm not kissing my brother!" xD classic xD
    "This would be the perfect time to suck you, but Mikey would hear and be like what?" xD amg another classic
    more whenever xD
    January 6th, 2011 at 12:47am
  • Just.a.Kid

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    I like ^^
    January 5th, 2011 at 11:50pm
  • mcr4evatrish

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    i like this too
    youre an ace writer
    January 5th, 2011 at 11:12pm
  • Jersi

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    I wonder if him walking to school, being a mess will become a problem for him? I know it would for me or maybe, his mind will settle out a little with the sleep deprivation and all settling in?
    That'd be a sight to read about.
    :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 09:19am
  • Misbehavior

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    Hello and happy new year! :D I still have 4 hours to go over where I live. Love ya for updating this masterpeice! I wasn't expecting an update so soon. :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 02:55am
  • shesmywynonna

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    nice update, though the ending seemed kind of rushed lol :)
    HAPPY NEW YEAR :)
    January 1st, 2011 at 01:48am
  • shesmywynonna

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    interesting :)
    heh, i loved when Gee and Frank were like "I love you Mikey" XD idk why i found it funny xD
    update when you can :)
    December 31st, 2010 at 07:29am
  • septicemia.

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    I like how you don't forget the little things with Frank's OCD - like a baby wipe along with the beer
    December 30th, 2010 at 07:56pm
  • Jersi

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    Gerard seems so...distant from reality.
    And Frank seems as if he is closed off from any connect to any other person that is not Mikey.
    Damn disorders.
    December 30th, 2010 at 06:03pm
  • Misbehavior

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    I just read the whole story up until the most recent chapter, and I must say that you really got the non-cliche part down! It's like a breath of fresh air to read something original like this. Also, I can't wait for the next update! Great work! :3
    December 30th, 2010 at 05:06am
  • MyLostHorizon

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    I love how it's active again :) :) :) :)
    can't wait for the next update ;D
    I'll be your little motivator :D :D
    December 23rd, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • MyLostHorizon

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    Why is this inactive D:
    it's really good :D
    I say you should re-activate it :D :D
    December 23rd, 2010 at 01:21pm
  • Eypto

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    I'm very interested in this.
    December 21st, 2010 at 11:35pm
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    Yay! Gerard's managing to keep him focused and not stress too much
    December 21st, 2010 at 08:40pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    nice :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 02:42am
  • septicemia.

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    Aww, bonding over cigarettes xD
    December 19th, 2010 at 07:04pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    aww gerard is so nice :)
    i suspect there to be some Frerard~ness by chapter 10-15? :DD
    December 18th, 2010 at 07:17pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    awwwww :( pooor Frankers >.<
    his dad's like the major douchbag >:(
    update sooper quick yeah >:D
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:54pm
  • septicemia.

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    Oh poor Frank!
    December 12th, 2010 at 09:52pm
  • septicemia.

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    I like it :]
    -subscribes-
    So you have OCD, huh? Do you act the same way Frank is?
    December 8th, 2010 at 09:49pm
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