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Firstly I'm just going to say that the layout was really hard for me to read, the text was too dark against the black background so I had to highlight everything when reading. But other that that, this is really very good! Your descriptions are strong and your overall writing style flows well. I really enjoyed this, good job!

This story is amazing, I am in awe. I love it <3 The plot is compelling, the characters are lovable what more do I need to say? haha

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I have yet to read your chapters but I just wanted you to know that so far you've done a great job of luring readers in.
First the layout is easy to read and simple so it's attractive and doesn't leave the reader squinting.
Secondly your summary sparked my interest because Draco Malfoy isn't someone from Harry Potter that I generally read about because well it's him xDDD but reading the summary has convinced me that it's worth the read and I can't wait :) good job so far!

i loved the update!!!

Yes there is hope can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love this!! Can't wait for the next chapter <3

I honestly wished tht Draco just blurted out tht Aiden lost her memory to shut Landon up becuz Landon honestly if Aiden didn't lose her memory and her and Draco was still broken up I'm sure tht Draco will still try to win her back and still be the one takin her to ball and not u like honestly get a grip of reality and realize tht Aiden is only with u becuz in her mind she doesn't like Draco from what her memory tells her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love this story and I feel so sad for Draco cuz he wants to tell Aiden the truth but she is soo damn confused tht she doesn't know what to believe anymore, anyhoo I'm team motherfucking Draco Malfoy he deserves to have Aiden back in my opinion yes he fucked up but he is willing to go back to her and Sheila ur a hoe, a desperate one at tht, ur not goin to win at all soo u should just drop fucking dead becuz ur not going to be dating Draco anytime soon so give up, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Still so sad. I just want her to remember already. I really hope she doesn't go to the dance with Landon. I will die. Lol. Once again well done!

DRACO DRACO DRACO!! I do really like Landon, but it will always be draco for me haha

Oh my goodness. I am so glad to have found this story. Your writing is simply spectacular. Every time one of their hearts break it hurts me too, its that fantastic. I feel so bad for them and would really just like to throw sheila off the astronomy tower and save her to make her think she's okay only to have her soul sucked out of her by dementors... i absolutely love, this and i can't wait to read more!

girl. I can't believe you. I want to be mad at you for not updating but you're too damn good.

I just love the concept for this story! I’ve never seen a story with a plot like this, so I can’t wait to see where you go with it! I’m only on chapter three right now, but I am looking forward to reading the rest! I can’t believe Blaise really thinks this jealousy plan is going to work! I think Christian is really funny and I really like his character. He really adds a little something extra to the story. I can just tell there is going to be more drama on the way, and I can’t wait to read how this stupid jealousy plan unfolds!

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I am not a big fan of the harry potter series, but i do have to say that you have perked my interest with this story! I think it's so addicting because this is a new side of Draco that the reader gets to see as opposed to the "bad boy" image he constantly gets in the books. Keep up the good work cause you're doing an amazing job!

Oh-my-fucking-god. This is amazing. Two chapters and I am already completely hooked. WHY IS THIS STORY SO PERFECT? I love how you actually made Draco a person, not just that heartless git that some weirdos think he is. And you made Aiden a very realistic character, no matter how much un-realistic shit (aka magic) goes on around her, which I appreciate. It makes this story so much better. KEEP WRITING. It's awesome!

ol having no thoughts ofating him.Sent here from Le Comment Swap This all just makes me want to cry, I never really liked Draco but this whole thing just makes me want to go and give him a hug! Your writing is amazing and it's just so upsetting, which shows your a good writer because you managed to manipulate my emotions!

Keep writing and good luck

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This all just makes me want to cry, I never really liked Draco but this whole thing just makes me want to go and give him a hug! Your writing is amazing and it's just so upsetting, which shows your a good writer because you managed to manipulate my emotions!

Keep writing and good luck!

I love this story!! you really need to update soon!

this story just breaks my heart. i love draco so much!! you're amazing!