My Bulletproof Heart, Your Hollow Point Smile - Comments

  • kakerk

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    This is great:D
    December 22nd, 2012 at 03:48am
  • CyanideSweetheart

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    I feel like the song is gonna be Lloyd Dobbler lol great story!<3
    September 15th, 2012 at 07:00am
  • Space Juju

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    Awwwww! So awesome! xD More soon please
    September 12th, 2012 at 01:51am
  • RayToroLeFro

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    Soo ive been waiting and waiting and waiting for an update... Please update before i have to come and find you then stand over your shoulder while i force you to make an update for us lovely readers:)
    August 17th, 2012 at 11:37pm
  • dmbbmb123

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    great story
    the plot is really got and it just well written
    great story, you are really talented
    please update soon !
    August 5th, 2012 at 08:09pm
  • TheDoctor

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    love the story
    hope there's more soon
    July 30th, 2012 at 09:03pm
  • frerardlove1

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    Still lovin
    July 30th, 2012 at 04:07pm
  • RayToroLeFro

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    This is brilliantly written. I just love it!!! Its been a while for an update soo please update? Pretty pretty please?
    July 29th, 2012 at 04:11am
  • Bulletproof Cyanide!

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    I really like your writing i think it is funny and very well done. This story is really good, i would really like to know what happens next so please please update soon :)
    July 7th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • LexieRhi

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    Gaaaaah you're killing me here! Too much sad Frankie, please even though I know everything won't get better yet can we have some happy lovey Frank? Pwetty pweez with cupcakes and puppy dogs and sexy times on top?
    June 25th, 2012 at 03:42am
  • Dumb_dumb

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    *eye twitches* Gerard can go stuff his cock in a minature iron maiden. >.> I'm sorry, but he's such a whore! Let's try to walk a mile in his shoes, even if he is expected to be straight and is in absolute denial about being gay and/or he doesn't want to risk his reputation and future it does not give him the right to screw around with Frank then flaunt his clearly physical and romantic relationship with his girlfriend in front of Frank. Mikey and Frank should tie him to a bed, spread him and pull his head out out of his ass, because it's so far up there he's choking on it. >.> (oh, I'm not in a bitter fit of anger at all. Psht.)

    Have you ever seen Queer as Folk? Well, Gerard is worse to Frank than Brian is to Justin (gah, that show is amazing! *takes a moment to come back from Lala Land*)

    On the non-bitter plus side I love that Mikey isn't taking Gerard's side (and especially not for the reason that he is his brother, he knows that Gerard is handing out Bullshit Cards), I wish he would show it a bit more aggressively though (but it's good that you have the characters stick to their non-violent tactics too, to each their own. Besides, non-violent protests work better than violent ones, so that could work here too. =] ).

    I hope that you can update again soon and I can't wait to see what lyrics you either make up or find to use. =]
    June 23rd, 2012 at 04:49am
  • frerardlove1

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    But gerard is a total jackass and needs to be put in his place and needs to get with frank
    June 15th, 2012 at 10:26pm
  • frerardlove1

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    No don't make Ashley and frank get together ewww there like best friends
    June 15th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • Audrey Hepburn.

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    I would update more frequently if you don't want your commenters to go away... But whatever. DAMMIT GERARD. Sheesh. I also kinda want Ashley and Frank to get together... It'd be adorable.
    June 12th, 2012 at 10:16pm
  • O.o?

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    Bad, Gerard! There's no such thing as just a kiss! Ugh, these two..,
    June 10th, 2012 at 11:57pm
  • Dumb_dumb

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    Gerard should get his head out of his ass. Just saying. I wish that Frank would grow a pair of balls and stand up to him because he does not deserve that sort of treatment.. I'm starting to just give up on Gerard being a decent person towards Frank and I find myself hoping that Frank will meet another guy who will learn about what Gerard's doing and how Frank feels about it (then get a bit defensive and protective of Frank while around Gerard). It's just a big circle of harassment and games that Gerard instigates and Frank does not stop. =\ Maybe I'm just bitter and I want to see Gerard get his ass handed to him then kicked.
    June 10th, 2012 at 10:18pm
  • Cyanide-Charlie

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    -kicks you in ass- update soon? :D
    Love it still. Gerards a butthead. can't wait for more
    May 2nd, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • Cyanide-Charlie

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    -kicks you in ass- update soon? :D
    Love it still. Gerards a butthead. can't wait for more
    May 2nd, 2012 at 06:40pm
  • frerardlove1

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    omg the hunger games i just read that its so good like one of my fav book its so awesome
    in other news this is going good i wonder when gerard is going to give frank som attention
    January 27th, 2012 at 10:11pm
  • Dumb_dumb

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    I love that Mikey can be there for Frank. =] it's nice to see that he is such a great friend to and for Frank and that Frank is the same to and for Mikey. I adore their relationship.
    This chapter was, oh goodness I feel so horrible for saying this, but it seemed a bit less descriptive than normal as well as shorter. =\ BUT, even though my dumb bum is being a whiny bitch, it is still really nice to have an update. =] thank you so much for that new year's gift, and I hope that you can update again soon! Please keep up the good work and if you ever have any sort of writers block don't be afraid to mention it to someone. =] (I just mean that in general, not as a hinted, pushy way of saying update fast)
    January 1st, 2012 at 10:12am