A dream of Louis - Comments

AWESOME STORY! I really liked it. I couldn't help but laugh a little at the poor old man when Louis is like "not good idea to walk around in the park at night". XD Great story. It's really well-written and I like it. I can feel the intensity in some moments described. This might be my first vampire story I've ever read personally and absolutely enjoyed. :D

That was really good. I liked the wording and the descriptinos that you used. :]

i love my story/dream its awesome,,,, to me. : )