Unveiled - Comments

Ahh, I quite like Zero's personality change! And I love the comfortable way the two react to each other :) so lovely.

Looking forward to more :)

Ommgshh is zero the boy in the car crash :O ?!?!?!
Also. I adore this story. its like a breath of fresh air :) (cheesy eh?)

I really love Zero and Val :) Especially Zero. Haha. He has some secrets, huh? Can't wait to find them out!:P I find it so sad when Val gets all beat up D: But, that just makes the story quite... Gripping i guess

This story is so original! I love it.

Zero's brother creeps me out though. He's so strange. And sinister.

This story is interesting, and intriguingly written. I like Valery's bashfulness and slip ups when trying to lie to the police officers, and I look forward to finding out more about Zero's 'brother'.
Well done :D

This story scares the living daylights outta me. When i was reading it, my eyes were darting around all scaredly :P haha, but that's what i love about it. It gets a reaction. Love it! Update soon(:

I love this story,
a little confusing but oh so intriguing.
The plot set up was very original, and the character's personalities somewhat as well.
It's one of those stories where you actually have to follow closely because the next minute you could be lost- at least with me that is.

Keeps you on the edge of your seat, making this an excellent story. (:

I love this story. Very original. :)

again LOOOOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!

oooohhhh not much there but IM IN LOVE with this already. PLEASE don't let it fall into the deep dark pit of forgotten stories okay?

kthanks!

xD

I like Zero! :D
Can't wait for the rest. Keep working on it...
Suggestions: Will you add how she got blind in the left eye? If so, please do. It be a good story element.

I love it:)
Zero seems like a weird guy but I like weird so I like Zero:D
Can't wait to read more.