Cross Your Fingers - Comments

This was really, really good. Great job :)

This is really adoriable, I love your chocie of words.
Your a brillant writer and the layout is lovely.

I just read this after seeing your entry in a contest and I loved it all!

You are a brilliant writer and I felt so much emotion reading this story. I loved their reactions...how Carlos knew straight away :)

I loved this a lot :)

This is adorable! At the beginning I was like, 'Aww, a baby, that's sweet' and then in the middle I was like 'This sucks, somehow they can't have kids and that's going to depress her' and then at the end I was like 'AWW.'

You're a brilliant writer and I love the emotion you gave us in this story :)

That was simply beautiful. The emotions were perfectly described and the descriptions were straight to the point. I loved how you showed both Victoria and Carlos's reaction as usually you see the woman's. I honestly thought that it was going to be a sad ending, but when the test was positive, I grinned so widely. Even though this was so short, it gave so much information though I think your excellent description did that. This was just too cute!

Awesome job! <3

Okay, first of all, the guy on the banner is super cute. I wonder who he is... Anyways, this was adorable to the max. I loved the emotions that you put into this; how nervous Victoria and Carlos are during those tense moments, especially when they find out that they're really pregnant. Then the real emotions set in. Like death to the pixies. said, you use simple, but sweet descriptions that truly helped this piece be the best that it could be. I'm so glad that it turned out well for them at the end :D I think that this happens to be the cutest one-shot that I've read in quite a while. <3
Amazing job! :D

This was really good! I really enjoyed it! Good luck. :)

This is completely adorable and has cheered me up an unbelievable amount.
I think you really showed all the emotions a woman, and a man as well, go through when taking a pregnancy test. The nerves, the fear but also the hope.
I think your simple but sweet descriptions really helped this piece be the best it can be.
You have every right to be proud <3