This was weird, I agree with you. But it was beautiful and descriptive as well. I love your writing, the way it's erratic and whole and it gets confusing, but a good confusing - like when you're reading an Ellen Hopkins book and you knew where it was going but then all of sudden, you're confused. You're wondering and your heart is beating fast but theres a faint smile on your lips because you enjoy it, the words capture your attention and they hold tightly to your imagination.