Unto This Hour - Comments

  • VandaliaLaRue

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    A really unique idea for an Avenged story :) I've read something of the sorts before but it wasn't quite like this. I really like it :)
    February 5th, 2011 at 10:20am
  • Neche Narcissist

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    I love this story... i'm excited for whats next...
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:19pm
  • Katelyn23

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    I liked chapter two :) It gave a little more insight into the girls and the time period.

    Ah! Time travel. That answers a few questions but it also brings up more. Now I'm excited to see exactly how they traveled back in time!

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
    December 31st, 2010 at 01:19am
  • bob nathaniel bryar

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    Ooh. this is a good story, can't wait to see more!
    December 30th, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • M. Shadz

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    so, im a huge dork. i havent gotten as far as reading this yet, since its now one in the morning and im tired. but i saw your journal so i figured i'd look and see and what not. and i fucking love your layout and i love your banner even more. <3
    December 30th, 2010 at 11:48am
  • Neche Narcissist

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    I love this... its so different and i cant wait to read more... X) update soon!
    December 30th, 2010 at 11:15am
  • iron underneath;

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    This is put together quite nice I think. :) I love the layout. If you want a pertty banner of just the three bachelors I could do that for ya, the plot seems to be put together nicely. <33
    December 30th, 2010 at 09:54am
  • Katelyn23

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    I think you set it up wonderfully!

    I love the colors and the feel of the layout. I like the way you wrote it, the description was great. The story has a vibe that I've never seen in an A7X fic before so I'm pretty excited about that. I loved the way you ended it! It definitely left me wanting more!

    I can't wait to see what happens next and who the letter is from!
    December 30th, 2010 at 08:40am
  • auden

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    I think that out of Avenged Sevenfold, my favorite is Brian and then Matt, haha. You have no idea how long it has been since I’ve read a Avenged Sevenfold fanfic. I’ve been reading manly fantasy stories lately so this was nice to read.

    I’m a bit confused though. The short description of the story is “Avenged Sevenfold Historical” but you don’t give a clear time period. With your description of tattoos, peicings and someone cursing it sounds pretty modern. That’s just me personally though. However I do suggest you mention a year or time period, just to make the setting appear more concrete.

    I’d love to read the second chapter and find out what was in the letter and what’s going on. This was very interesting. Avenged Sevenfold with a twist, this doesn’t seem like any other fanfic.
    December 30th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • courtney ann marie ;

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    See told you it was amazing. (:
    December 27th, 2010 at 08:22am