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  • Kiwi;;

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    Lalalalove it CiCi girl(:
    January 5th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • PinkMartini

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    It's super cute, but it's a little confusing towards the end and there were some typos. A little revision, and it'll be amazing. Good luck in the contest! :D
    December 31st, 2010 at 02:39am
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