False Southern Gentility - Comments

@ teenagemutantme
! It's am honor!

@ themaddwriter
...wow. really? Thank you...so much

I just stayed up all night and morning because I was reading your story and I cannot just tell you that your story was amazing, that is simply not enough. When I finished this story a few moments ago, I felt as if I understood how Emily Dickinson could feel as if physically the top of her head had been taken off, that was poetry. And despite the errors that I saw and mentally corrected as I read I felt as there was nothing more for me, that my world was ending and it would never be the same ever again, that is literature. I may not be some famous critic or an editor but I know that when something startles me and evokes a raw emotion that what I'm reading is literature. I commend your art and hope you continue to write.

:) I love this so far. Your writing is so amazing and mature, it sounds as if it were written by someone who has accomplished being a top-novelist. This reminds me faintly of "Roll of Thunder: Hear my Cry", but that's only because it was the only Southern-styled book I have read. I can't wait to read more on this, and definitely subscribed. I'll be sure to mention you in one of my author's notes, so others can read.

While this story is great, it's lacking some things. The layout could be eye-catching, and you could have a title page. Also, if you want commenters to see you have replied, reply on their page, they're more likely to stay in contact and conversation.;)

Love the story. Excellente.

I love them! And i'm really excited that you enjoy my books! I'm still working on 'Living through the fear', but once i'm done I hope to make it into a series. Call it, 'Surviving Hard Times', go from the Civil war, all the way to World War 2.

I absolutely loves Just a dream, it was great! I loved the way that you described how he thought she looked and compared her to the 'vixen' in his bed. lol. I L*O*V*E*D, loved it!

This is so good. I enjoy it :D

its going great so for!!!! keep writing it. can't wait for the next chapter, it's gonna be as great as the rest--i know that for a fact. haha.
write on!
~JynxRaven (Wings of Hope/Shadow Guardian)

awesome so far...keep writing :) im interested in how its gonna turn out :)
write on.
~JynxRaven (Shadow Guardian/Wings of Hope)

You seriously love that part, don't you?? lol

yeah, bookworms rule :)

Thank you so much, and by now I think that I have at least three more chapters up, it's great to get my writing out there for people to see and read. Please, make sure to suggest it to anybody! I love having people read them! lol

And BTW, Being a book worm, TOTALLY AWESOME!!! lol

I've only read the first chapter, but I love it already :D
I love your writing style, by the way <3

Thank you, I am used to Word, so I'll have to work on that. If you could, please suggest me as a friend to people, I would really love to get my writing out there! <3

really great story...lovin' every minute of it. it could be spaced out between paragraphs (hit enter 1 time after paragraphs) but its really good... write on! ~JynxRaven (Wings of Hope)