Give Me The Chair - Comments

Like holy shit.
That gave me chills like crazy.
You painted this godawful horror amazingly. Unbelievable.

That was brilliant beyond belief.

(And yes, I do very much consider this comment 'something important', stupid tick box. :tehe:)

Amazing. But depressing. I loved it either way.

Fuck.
That was good. Amazing.

I love the ending. It doesn't entirely fit in, or work perfectly as an ending. But I feel its great. It just sends out good vibes.
xD

Well done.

ohmigod. This is truly amazing. It''s softly harsh, and the the prose is desperate. The desperation of the condemned man. I liked that you didn't exaggerate the whole "don't kill me, i didn't do it" aspect of the story and you had him reminiscing about his life.

The ending confused me a bit, but here's how I understand it: the man's wife, after having signed the death certificate, was in a room with the doctor, and she was so upset she stabbed him with a scalpel. That's it, right? If it is, I think it was written alright, but I honestly don't like it as an ending. I don't know why, but to me it just doesn't match.

My favorite line of the whole thing was: Wires flopped aimlessly around me, some like worms, and others like anacondas poised to strangle and kill. I love that description.

Overall, it's an amazing story.

Extremely powerful.
Wonderfully subtle twist at the end, as well. How you barely brought attention to it, and yet it's impact was still so strong.
That was amazing.

It's so sad! And so great!
I think it was really awesome!