Faire L’amour - Comments

This was really hot and very entertaining to read. The layout alone makes anyone read the story, because it's insight of how amazing it is going to be. Sometimes, I am not a fan of reading erotic because a lot of people don't know how to really express it. At the end, it has a porn vibe to it, but this story in particular was not at all bad. It was actually written beautifully and very well. I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors which was great.

Loved how you managed to portrayed him as a dominant. It was very sensual and a great fit to his looks and personality. I loved this. Great piece.

Loved this!

Just wow.
Just.. WOW.

I'd seriously love this to happen to me. He could dominate me in any way, shape, or form!
I can't say that I wouldn't be a little aggresive back though, cause I totally would.
Great job!

I love ur story! U made me CIMP!!! Lol

Love this story, turned me on so much. You were about two spots away from getting third plae in my contest. Great story!

Wow.

You did a great job, this was the sexiest, hottest sex scene I've ever read, again, you did a great job, please write another!!(: <3

You did an amazing job :)

Wow, haha.
I'm actually lost for words.
Kellan Lutz is a babe and I think sexually, you portray him very well ;)
This is the most intense/steamiest/sexiest sex scene I've read.
And boy, you sure know you're stuff.
Almost made me CIMP reading this ;D hahaha, get it? LOL.
Loved it, as I do with all of your wonderful creations :D<3
- Gossip Girl, XOXO ;')

Domination FTW. XD

how can you not be turned on by that[\I]?
that was steamy sexy and damn, Yas, you got a dirty mind ;)

Good Lord!
Haha.
I never read something that intense, but I liked it.
It was really good.
And I agree.
Kellan Lutz is fine! =D

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it so much make another one please

I loved it