Breakfast After Ten - Comments

Graffiti:

I've rendered Kristina nearly speechless? What an accomplishment!
Lol.
Thanks a lot. That meant a lot that you liked it that much.

<3

oh yes, i loved it my dear. it was absolutely wonderful.

Slap Happy Bullet:

i absolutely adored it.
those details that you mentioned were completely amazing. like the sheets and the smell of breakfast and the music..
everything that suddenly made him who he is.
my favorite detail of all was the swimming light. i completely understood the way it moved and how it just tied all of it together. you described it perfectly.

this oneshot is definitely one of my favorite for any writer. i can't even think of anything else to say.

I've rendered Kristina nearly speechless? What an accomplishment!
Lol.
Thanks a lot. That meant a lot that you liked it that much.

<3

i absolutely adored it.
those details that you mentioned were completely amazing. like the sheets and the smell of breakfast and the music..
everything that suddenly made him who he is.
my favorite detail of all was the swimming light. i completely understood the way it moved and how it just tied all of it together. you described it perfectly.

this oneshot is definitely one of my favorite for any writer. i can't even think of anything else to say.

Ridele:

I loved how you used 'swimming light' throughout the whole piece. I thought it was beautiful Bobbye, all the small little details that can really help you picture it all as it unfolds. Ash is spot on, it is really well crafted.
Beautiful!

Thank you. <3

I loved how you used 'swimming light' throughout the whole piece. I thought it was beautiful Bobbye, all the small little details that can really help you picture it all as it unfolds. Ash is spot on, it is really well crafted.
Beautiful!

Graffiti:

finksgirl:

Holy hell, woman.
How can you think that WASN'T well crafted?
That was brilliant. You know I love descriptive pieces and things like this make me weak in the knees.
And the last bit? Beautiful.

:arms:

...and....I found another Ianto emoticon. :roll:
-giggle-

He he.

And cuz I didn't think it was... ha ha, thanks a lot though. :) I love you, Ashy!

<3

:hug:

You better, bitch.

XD

;;P

finksgirl:

Holy hell, woman.
How can you think that WASN'T well crafted?
That was brilliant. You know I love descriptive pieces and things like this make me weak in the knees.
And the last bit? Beautiful.

:arms:

...and....I found another Ianto emoticon. :roll:
-giggle-

He he.

And cuz I didn't think it was... ha ha, thanks a lot though. :) I love you, Ashy!

<3

:hug:

Holy hell, woman.
How can you think that WASN'T well crafted?
That was brilliant. You know I love descriptive pieces and things like this make me weak in the knees.
And the last bit? Beautiful.

:arms:

...and....I found another Ianto emoticon. :roll:
-giggle-