Trashed and Scattered - Comments

I just started reading this story and I would like to say that you are an amazing author.
I felt so disappointed when I clicked on Chapter 15 and then realized I had no chapters to read afterwards. D:
The pranks and conversations between Brian and Raelene are hilarious. I laughed non-stop, I swear.
I hope she decides to give Brian the time of day. That's when things will start to get interesting. (;

You made me fucking cry.
I hope you are fucking proud of yourself.
And i know i just told you the same thing on MSN, but I felt it needed to be expressed here too.

yay!! an update!!
jealousy is such an ugly thing, all it takes is one person to start trouble and look what happens.
amazing!! loved the chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens with the whole brian/zacky relationship drama..:0)
update soon!!

Wow I cant believe that Brian finally admitted it. Zacky needs to talk to her also.

Amazing update. The advice moment between Brian and Ryls (I cannot remember how to spell her name out at the moment) was not expected, at least for me. I'm excited for the next updatee[:.

I did not distract you! You distracted yourself!
Buuuuuuut, I love love love love the chapter!
Update again soon!

Amazing!!!!
Absolutely loved it!!!!
Update soon!!!!!

I cannot believe Ryleigh could even think about apologizing to someone who said those kinds of things to her and her sister! That's crazy talk! I feel so bad for Raelene, those girls are meanies. ):
Update again soooon.

I have complete respect for Ryleigh.
There is no way I could be nice to someone after the things that were said...

how the fuck did the Zacky/Ryleigh thing come up??
That would be hilarious if Jimmy kicked Jaz out & had Ralene shack up with him!
More please <3

Drama Drama Drama! I love it!

OHMYGOD. This chapter literally made my stomach hurt (in a good way) sorta, and my eyes well up.
I can't believe Michelle would say something about their parents like that.
Raelene has every right to think like that!
Everyone but Val were being bitches.
Update again soon! :D

Ahh!! Drama!! And it's not the good kind!! Although it is entertaining... Anywhooo!! I hope you feel better soon!! And update again soon!! Don't they make some sort of pill for the whole no immune system thing? Hmmm, I need one too then... Haha. Seriously though, this is a great story. I'm addicted[:.

AHHH!
I LOVE this story with a firey burning passion!
Keep writing!!!
<3

OMG!!
*gasps*
What a chapter!! I really had my nose pressed to the computer screen, it was like watching an action movie!!
Talk about DRAMA!!
I went from being shocked to being just pissed off(but in a good way..lol)
Just wow!! I didn't see that coming at all..lol
I predict some running away, because after having all that thrown at them I wouldn't stick around and big thumbs up to Val for being the only one that was sticking up for them!!!
Update soon!!!

Man that is gay I cant believe that the girls did that I hope that Jimmy goes to her anyways.

I'm sitting here with a huge frown on my face.
What the fuck have those girls been smoking?
Yeah, Val seems to be the only sane one.

Karma's a bitch.... he best watch his back!
More please <3

I personally don't think its moving too fast or too slow, its at just the right pace. Brian was an ass for pulling that kind of prank. He could have done anything else that was taking it a bit too far. Wow it seems like a lot of stories I read some of the authors computers have like eaten their chapters and then they have to start over again. Your like the 4th author that has lost some type of work because of their computer, so I'll give the same advice, backup everything onto a flash drive believe me it will save you the aggravation later. Amazing!!! update soon!!

Clever writing, looking forward to reading more of this :)