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  • N.KilledThePromQueen

    N.KilledThePromQueen (100)

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    yeah!
    i like it so far go on :D
    xx
    January 27th, 2008 at 05:34pm
  • nothing.

    nothing. (250)

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    -first comment!-
    Dance

    What you have so far is promising,
    but extremely short.
    Work on making this chapter longer before you post another.
    January 23rd, 2008 at 08:55pm
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