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  • teenagedream91

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    So much of a great cliffhanger that you can turn it into a story if you wanted. Great ending, cathibg you attention and making you want read more or even imagine what they would say to each oher since it's the end. Great job! :D
    January 26th, 2011 at 04:29pm
  • xReilynnx

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    Aw. It's adorable. :3 It'd be a fun idea to expand on this story, expand on her relationship with Brad and Lawrence after the encounter. But good job again. :D
    January 26th, 2011 at 08:06am
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