Eleanor Rigby - Comments

Love this song.

fdhgkgf it posted before I was ready- I wanted to add a bit more:
However, i found that the mind creating it's own stories about people and the theory of Father McKenzie scrubbing his socks perfect to just be perfection: I think like that, so it's just relateableish, i guess. Overall, I really do like it

I like it. The premise of the Beatles song being the inspiration is interesting, and I love how the narrator speaks. It's quaint and just nice. The only thing I really had an issue with was the last two/threeish paragraphs of the second chapter- though it's nice with the repetition and the idea it was trying to bring across, I didn't like how simple the words and sentences were. It just doesn't work.