Souls to Save - Comments

Alyxx101time (100)

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Wow...he looks....wow...

February 22nd, 2011 at 04:50am

stained glass eyes (150)

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Bwahaha yeah xD Andy Six

February 20th, 2011 at 08:02pm

Alyxx101time (100)

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Thats a guy????? :O

February 19th, 2011 at 10:35pm

stained glass eyes (150)

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I like the story so far. I just have one suggestion: put an extra space between each paragraph. It would make it a lot easier to read :)

Also, I find it hilarious that you've used a boy to portray Lindsey x] Though in that picture he does make a very pretty girl...

February 13th, 2011 at 03:04am

Alyxx101time (100)

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aww thx :)

February 3rd, 2011 at 05:13am

dreaminLara (100)

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First to comment! :) I'm really interested in your story. The plot sounds very interesting. Would love to read more.

February 2nd, 2011 at 02:59pm