San Francisco, Lovely - Comments

Is this story not going to be updated?

I love this story very much and Venn and Darren making out with little clothing was something I didn't expect. haha seems to me like Darren was getting a bit jealous seeing Sami getting close to Cooper. Cooper seems to have made more progress than Darren which in turn made him jealous because of the closeness those two have. Just a thought and I feel bad for Joey seeing his best friend basically dry humping his crush against the wall and what's worse is that Darren KNOWS about his crush on Venna. Being drunk leads to some crazy shit, can't wait for more :D

I've only read the first chapter of this so far, because I'm trying to work my way through my outrageously long list of stories in my bookmarks, but I can't believe how much I love this story! I mean, I found it in the updated stories list, and I'm used to sorting through dozens and dozens of chatspeak filled horrors before I come on to a good one!

I love the male counterpart you've created in this. He's so unique compared to a lot of the others around here. I mean, when I was reading his lines and gestures, it came out completely different than what the voice in my head usually sounds like. XD It was just great.

And I get this really nostalgic feeling when you describe San Fransisco, like city life in the old movies about the 1950's. I love that. I wish I lived in that scene. ^_^ I'm definitely subscribing, and I'll comment again when I get through the rest of the chapters!

I love this.. :D I hope you decide to post soon coz I'll be reading it.. :D

i. need. more!!!!

I'm pretty much in love with this. It's so great.
And I love that Darren AND Joey are in this. Those boys.. <3
Oh! And the AVPM/S references? Nice touch. (;

I really think we need another chapter of this!

I absolutely love this story & I hope you'll start updating it again soon! :)

may is here :) update time. <3

IT IS MAY. YOU MUST UPDATE.
:D

pleasepleasepleaseupdate<3

loved the avpm references<3

anxiously awaiting thurdsay :D

Loved the update! :D Aw, Sami's Birthday! My cousin's birthday is on St. Patty's Day too! :D Um... haha, and they're funny when they're drunk. :P But really, who isn't?
Uh-oh, though. Darren and Venna? Kissing? What? I'm wondering if that's just because they were both drunk, or if Darren did that since he saw Sami and Cooper being kind of cuddley...? :o That was a twist, though, and it made the chapter more interesting. Not that it wouldn't have been without it, but... you get what I mean.
Overall, great update! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

Yay, another chapter :)
I cannot believe Darren and Vienna. Drunk, drunk people.

All the AVPM references were not lost on me ;D

I enjoyed this chapter, and I hope that you get another one up soon!
Great job!

I freaking freaking love this story, especially all the AVPM/AVPS quotes! Keep writing and updating I can't wait!

Me gusta this story. :)

AHHHHH Even though this chapter was kinda sad on the Sami/Darren and Joey/Venna aspects, I still very much enjoyed the AVMP reference.
Update soon!

So I love this story, and I am incredibly sorry because I subscribed yesterday and I apparently did not comment... so... here it goes.
Lovely story so far, I love that it's written in scenes, and of course besides Darren I love your take on Joey's personality. You've got a great way of capturing characters, and I thoroughly enjoy reading it . Thank you for sharing your writing skills with us [and for gracing Darren in the story :))]

FRIDAY FRIDAY FRIDAY.
oh god, sorry that was random.
also, when are you gonna update this ? xD