Hypnotized by the Danger Line - Comments

update like now please i want more please

That was wow. Jimmy loves Lola... ;) But something will happen I just feel it.
Ok and I want to cry I feel for Brian even if he is a jealous mofo, Missy is a bitch, but they are cute together so they better as hell make up!!

You excite me.. your minds when you write are just wow <3 This says a lot too.

I heart this ok?

THIS IS AMAZING! ZOMG YES!!!!!!!!!!

How do people no comment on this? It's fucking amazing ok?

well seeing as I suppose you are Jimmy/Brian lovers they will win.. but.. maybe Matt and papa gates will hmmm either way ;)

That was just wow. Kinky face? lmao.
Great job!

Whoa.. I can totally see Brian being the collar and handcuff type.
Am I seeing GD love in the air?
Missy and Tre = Adorable.
Lola and BJ= cute.

But... Brian and Jims need to stop being dicks so they can get their girls back?

JUST AMAZING!

Awesome. Update soon pwease? I really like how you involved GD and HIM, makes me wonder who else you're going to feature. Awesome chapter.

Tension. Bri is a jealous man xD
Jimmy and Lolo= so cute!!!!
LOVE this.
Oh and having GD appear, and Lola and Missy do that is a win!

love the update and grrr bri he needs missy to hand him his ass lol love it update soon

this is so good cant wait for more

FUCKING YES.

wow just fucking wow!
You not only make it excited for the lady readers.. but for males too.
This story is great!

EEEK! You guys are so descriptive, it's like amazing, I can picture myself right there when you two write. JUST AMAZING!

oh em gee.... ;)
Jimmy is a sweetheart, and that was hot!

This is amazing, omg!!

CLIFFHANGER? ajsklhasfdf NOOOO. lol.
Update soon? Please.. <3

Nikki Sixx= fucking amazing bassist..
and the Don of HB is a win ;)