Better Than Revenge - Comments

Ugh, that was so good.
You're writing kind of breaks my heart.
Its just ... realistic.
Shame on Facebook.
Keep writing, bb.

I loved it! I liked the way she got revenge, even though it was very simple. I liked that the lyrics were put in there too. Very creative and they fit. The banner was amazing too :)

Overall, good job and good luck!

That was really good, and I have only one thing to say: It moved very fast.

Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it just seemed like he's saying "I love you" And agreeing to her coming over and then like 20 minutes later he's like "There's someone else, I'm leaving you"

It just seemed a little weird to me.

But all in all, it was very good. Very funny too. I liked it. :]