When They Found You On The Bathroom Floor. - Comments

  • saxophonesandmcr

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    It's refreshing to read a story that isn't afraid to deny readers of the happy ending they expect. I'm slowly falling in love with your writing :D

    xxx
    June 10th, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • saxophonesandmcr

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    It's refreshing to read a story that isn't afraid to deny readers of the happy ending they expect. I'm slowly falling in love with your writing :D

    xxx
    June 10th, 2009 at 11:54pm
  • mia bell.

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    Wow. That was really...depressing?
    It's hard to read all the stuff with one of them like pure evil, but this one was good although still somewhat hard to stomach.
    June 29th, 2008 at 09:41am
  • ssadiee

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    Wow. I lovee your writing and i decided i am going to read all of it.
    This reminds of the chapters in 'Our Secret love" when they're living in the cheap motels and Gerard was drinking aggresively.
    June 26th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • ssadiee

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    Wow. I lovee your writing and i decided i am going to read all of it.
    This reminds of the chapters in 'Our Secret love" when they're living in the cheap motels and Gerard was drinking aggresively.
    June 26th, 2008 at 11:36pm
  • Peroxidebabe

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    lisablackrose:
    I love your stories so much, you're a very talented writer.x
    ^I agree with her!

    That was great and so so so so sad!

    I assume that it was from Gerard's POV, how can he do that to poor Frankie :(

    Anyway, I really liked this it was really well written :)
    I'm reading your stories!!

    and i agree amazing writing depressing as hell Cry
    February 11th, 2008 at 06:04pm
  • Cocolate

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    lisablackrose:
    I love your stories so much, you're a very talented writer.x
    ^I agree with her!

    That was great and so so so so sad!

    I assume that it was from Gerard's POV, how can he do that to poor Frankie :(

    Anyway, I really liked this it was really well written :)
    February 8th, 2008 at 07:31pm
  • lisablackrose

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    OMG, that was so sad, poor Frank.

    I love your stories so much, you're a very talented writer.x
    February 5th, 2008 at 01:12pm
  • fall out of grace

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    seriously...holy fucking shit...poor frankie! you know...i can kinda feel from gerards pov though...in a sick...twisted way...(um...i hope you know i now have that line from cemetary drive stuck in my head. -.-" lolz i'll miss you....i'll miss you so far...and the collision of your kiss is what made it so hard...xD) hehe

    me thinks that gerard needs to go get some mental help...seeing a dead body (whoused to be your boyfriend, and is now yourboytoy) cant be too easy on anyone...that's just demented...

    i feel so bad for frankie though...poor guy...its pretty bad when youknow think that the only way out of thatrelationship is suicide...but i hope you're happier there now...where ever there may be...

    thanks so much for this standalone! i luffz it muchly! :D even though it is sad...
    January 30th, 2008 at 12:25am
  • KranK

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    wow...you just stabbed me in the heart and twisted the knife round, and round, and round...
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    =[ This was heart-wrenching!! UGH! god...i was just like:"hes gonna kill himself, hes gonna kill himself..." but when it happened i was like:"NO WAY!!!"
    you have that effect..
    January 28th, 2008 at 08:12pm
  • SakuraAddiction.. x

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    Sad.
    Poor Frankie!

    Very deep and good though.

    xoxo
    January 28th, 2008 at 08:20am
  • Converse Addict

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    .........deep.....god was that Gerard? whatever........i like it......plz read my Story Death's Parade
    January 28th, 2008 at 08:07am