Live the Dream - Comments

Silent_Angel (100)

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Wow, I really like this story.

Lucy :)

December 28th, 2011 at 06:25pm

Weezze (100)

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Another great pair of chapters

March 22nd, 2011 at 03:56pm

BlissfulNightmare; (100)

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Sounds interesting so far and i like the picture that you used as a banner. Great descriptions as well and wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

March 8th, 2011 at 06:43pm

Weezze (100)

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I like the hope at the end of the first chapter, makes me as a reader think ‘Yes, they can do it’.

It’s interesting to see the differences in the styles of writing that varies between person.

I like how in chapter two everything seems to be going well, quite a nice life (though with a few problems), but then your hit with the death of Adam, but I think the way it’s done makes more of an impact and more shocking.

Great start guys, keep up the good work.

March 6th, 2011 at 02:05pm