Ooooh. Why should Frank be afraid of Gerard? Interesting stuff! I really like how this story is progressing - I can't wait to find out what is going on! Great update! Can't wait for more :D
I really liked this chapter! I love that we get the story from both view points, and that so far the two view points have been written from different authors - The two different writing styles are great together because they give a division in the perspectives of the characters; it really feels like you're reading two different people's train of thought. Does that make sense? Great update! Can't wait for more :D
I really liked this chapter! I love that we get the story from both view points, and that so far the two view points have been written from different authors - The two different writing styles are great together because they give a division in the perspectives of the characters; it really feels like you're reading two different people's train of thought. Does that make sense? Great update! Can't wait for more :D
OMG WOW. I have no idea what the hell is going on, but I love it xD This is so intriguing, so many questions! I can't wait to find out all of the answers to them! Great update! Can't wait for more :D
hi :D so i think this was pretty good. i mean yeah it could be better but as you write itll just get better. and im subscribing, and im looking forward for more