Nothing to me. - Comments

I quite liked this. :3
As people say, sex sells. Thankfully, there wasn't any in this. Woo.
But yes, I think that it could have been longer, and could possibly have had a bit more added to it. Perhaps..Why he pushed her away? Or maybe given another point of view, maybe his, or the other girl's?

Either way, it was nicely written and I could see it turning into a good story if it wasn't just a one shot.

I pushed myself of the floor, roughly grabbed the boy I’d loved two seconds ago, and slapped him hard around the face. “Go fuck yourself” I whispered in his ear <---- Best line ever! XD
:L epicnessssssss! XD
Jay Shadz xo

I liked it, a lot. I thought it was amazing :)