As usual, this is just wonderful. I love everything about it. Your descriptions are just wonderful, and I love the dialog (what little there is). I just love how this is written and I think it's wonderful how different Ryan and Brendon's personalities are-- Ryan puts off this vibe that's kind of innocent and Brendon is just confident and (I can't think of the word at the moment 
)... but he's just in control while Ryan's almost unsure of everything. I really enjoyed reading this. Wonderful job. 
March 12th, 2011 at 03:28am
