My Hero? - Comments

masked beauty (150)

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I really love the story concept,
It's lovely and cute.
Your always a good writer and I hope you update this soon. :)

August 6th, 2011 at 12:52am

Emilise284 (100)

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Oh no, stupid Mibba made this story Inactive on my subscriptions... so this comments count for the last two chapters: "You're awesome! Loved the chapters... was he telling the truth? Update soon!"

May 8th, 2011 at 02:40am

toolongtolive (100)

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i do like it
ophelia is a likeable character

April 13th, 2011 at 01:02pm

Emilise284 (100)

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OH, what happened...? More soon?

April 7th, 2011 at 08:08pm

Emilise284 (100)

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Ah, William. I think he's kind of naive.... more soon?

March 31st, 2011 at 02:27am

xpectashans (100)

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This is adorable :) There are a few minor grammar mistakes, but don't hang yourself over that... instead, write the next chapter! It has 'Rapunzel' written all over it, and I'm excited for the twist that'll happen over the next 2 weeks she'll be stuck in that tavern... :))

March 28th, 2011 at 10:53pm

pageofpaper (100)

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Hehe she has a pet squirel. :D

March 21st, 2011 at 04:18am

Emilise284 (100)

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For one, I love your layout. For two, your story idea is adorable and I can't wait for more. *Reaches out to subscribe, then realizes I already have!*

March 14th, 2011 at 12:52am