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  • unlove

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    oh god i sure do hope john beats elena into talking to harlow about it
    i mean it would hurt either way but i figured it would hurt more if she didnt hear it from john first y'know?
    update soon pleaseee :-)
    April 16th, 2012 at 11:45am
  • AlexAddiction

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    oh my god so much suspense I CAN"T HANDLE IT!
    April 16th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • vices

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    holy SHIT this is getting intense.
    I have to leave for dinner so I can't leave a super long comment :c
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    April 16th, 2012 at 03:07am
  • Anthem.

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    YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT?! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?! I NEED MORE!!
    April 16th, 2012 at 01:52am
  • Yay Its Alex!

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    That`s exactly what I was thinking ^^
    Let's hope you take less then ten years to write the next chapter because I might die if you don't update soon! :D
    April 16th, 2012 at 01:20am
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    OOh I wonder what's going to happen. Harlow's probably gonna decide she's ready and John'll like reject her or something.
    April 15th, 2012 at 11:07pm
  • AlexAddiction

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    I LOVE THAT CHAPTER!
    February 26th, 2012 at 11:49am
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    I want it to be a set up for disaster, because I'm a bitch and love the drama.
    But then I don't want it to be because they are just so cute together and it seems John is trying really hard.
    I hope for more updates sometime this year. ;)
    February 18th, 2012 at 11:06am
  • Caitosaur.

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    I think they're cute but I kind of think they might fail [[but I'm hoping they won't]]

    I would like to point out that in the new chapter it's written:
    "He looked to the blood that was sitting uncomfortably on his mattress, gauging her reaction."

    and I was like "WTF blood"!?
    and then I realized you meant "blonde" and everything in the world was right again.
    February 16th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • becauseiamfree

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    first update of 2012 :D
    i hope updates come sooner because this story is amazing.
    i loved that whole last scene when they told eachother why they liked eachother
    that was just adorable
    i hope he will finally cancel the bet and make her his officially :3
    cant wait for more <3
    February 14th, 2012 at 04:38pm
  • roll_your_eyes_at_me

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    That was like my favorite chapter ever.
    I want them to be right for each other- I forgot how you put it. aha
    The end bedroom part was my favorite. I love how you're
    incorperating his past into it. And how hurt she felt.
    It was perfect.
    I wonder what it means that the bet's going to be over.
    Does it mean he's going to call it off? I hope so.
    I wonder if she'll find out about it.

    You guys don't update nearly enough, and it hurts my heart.
    PLease please please please please please please upidate as soon as possible :)
    February 14th, 2012 at 06:43am
  • be human.

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    The amount of love I have for this story is a bit ridiculous, to say the least, but I can't help myself! Haha. Your guys' writing ability amazes me :)
    Also an update for Telescope Eyes would pretty much be one of the greatest things to happen in the history of ever...
    February 14th, 2012 at 05:12am
  • vices

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    DFA;SJXCNl;dfjL;FJSDKLFJl;sdjkf;LKJ
    OH MY GOD
    "DON'T JUDGE ME FOR MY PAST, PLEASE JUST HELP ME WITH MY FUTURE"
    ASDJCKLsdhf;lJSDFL;JAS;DLCKJ;sdkfjSDKF;ASLDKCJL;dfj;LSDJKf
    excuse me while I cry
    in the corner
    because of my lack of cute guys like JohnOh and Josh Franceschi and Josh Hutcherson and Vic Fuentes and Kellin Quinn and such.
    but oh lord
    that chapter was SO CUTE.
    ugh. <3
    please update soon c:
    February 14th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • lovelyhope

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    John needs to end the bet now. I honestly don't think he will though. Yeah, I'm cynical hahaha
    February 14th, 2012 at 04:48am
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I LOVE YOU
    February 14th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    I'd say I'm glad you updated, but I'm still bitter. I won't lie.
    February 14th, 2012 at 03:11am
  • kes11

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    ahhh i miss this story! pleaseee update soon!
    February 13th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • bitter.love

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    Im freaking out here, I've been PATIENTLY.. maybe not exaxtly patiently BUT I've been waiting for you guys to update! IT's BEEN FOREVER AND EVER AND I WANNA KNOW WHATS NEXT! I'm dying to know! So the moral of my commen is that you should update. OKAY? (You better agree and update)
    February 1st, 2012 at 05:18am
  • letsfabricate

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    You guys seriously need to update.
    I'm dying to know what comes next.
    January 14th, 2012 at 07:20am
  • InfinitelyReckless

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    holy shit, I hope John drops out of the bet already before Harlow knows.
    God, you need to update! :))
    and oh, do you have any idea how much i love this story?
    no? well, a lot!
    January 10th, 2012 at 03:53pm