Don't worry. This is way too good to take points off just because of the mistake in the title. Lol. I love it. And the story banner is awesome. Keep up the good work!
June 24th, 2011 at 08:30pm
Just wanted to get this out of the way; the lyric is from the song Sleep, not Disenchanted. :'3
Secondly, I thought this was actually really sad, but I enjoyed reading it. It was written well, and it made my eyes glaze over with tears. >.< (Then again, it's real easy to make me sad and tear up a bit.)
All in all, I loved it. :)