Love or Loyalty - Comments

  • Car.Crash.Hearts

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    I loved the story. I loved how it ended it wasn't cliche at all.
    April 4th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • SynfulKisses

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    Ok so I needed a break from writing tonight and decided to take on something short. And holy shit!! This was amazing. I can't tell you how this drew me in from the very start. You've got yourself a new fan though I have no clue how I'm ever going to catch up on all your stories and Rhian's but I will do my best to do so because this just blew me away. And the ending..I just knew when Matt said he couldn't do it he was going to make Brian do it. I loved it!! <333
    March 31st, 2011 at 05:32am
  • winter soldier

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    I didn't like that bitch anyway.

    Okay, she's not a bitch. But I don't like snitches. They ruin my own plans for world domination...er, successful lemonade stands.
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    As much as I'm somewhat disappointed with Brian for choosing his loyalty to Matt over his love of Angela, I'm actually glad you ended it this way.

    In my opinion, it was an awesome three shot Hun. :)
    March 30th, 2011 at 09:28pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    I don't know whether I believe Brian when he say's he didn't know about Johnny! IDK!
    More soon?
    March 29th, 2011 at 10:12pm
  • winter soldier

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    Interesting, very interesting. Poor Johnny. I'm watching this for now...especially since there's only one chapter left.
    March 29th, 2011 at 02:30pm
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it =)
    March 29th, 2011 at 01:52am
  • Tilers Haner

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    Immediately intrigued by the opening paragraph (on the next bit I kinda got lost in the smut ;)
    Anyway, an interesting start, looking forward to more :) xx
    March 28th, 2011 at 08:53pm