Cover Boy - Comments

First off, I want to start with thanking you for having such good grammar. It's rare to find someone these days who actually knows what a comma is, let alone how to use it.

That being said, this story is amazing. I love the way you develop the characters throughout the story, and I think it's amazing how you portrayed Riley. The fact that he's eager to be doing something he loves, whether he gets paid for it or not, is something that not many people can appreciate.

Great job! Keep up the good work!

Such a sweet ol' story! <3

AWWWW... :3

This is a major fangirl moment. I just squealed and awwed all through the end. I love it that you didn't made so much drama in here and that they didn't have any hurtful arguments. This is so lovely but I did hope that it was a bit longer, haha xD

aww its over...such fluff!
i loved this story!
great job...srry for late comment..

What a GORGEOUS ending. I LOVED it. ^_^

That was a very sweet ending (:
I thought Matty would have called Riley and heard the phone ringing just outside his door, but I liked the way you wrapped it up better <3

I'm going to miss these two like crazy

Awesome ending! I love this story! :)

Last chapter :(
This story was so amazing.
I was actually extremely releived that Matty hadn't moved on or anything. He and Riely clearly belong together. The last chapter was one big ball of sap but I wouldn't want it any otter way :)

I loved the ending!!!! Although, I'm sad that it's over... But it was beautiful and cheezy and sweet. I love a happy ending and your's didn't dissapoint.
I liked how Matty finally decided to call him, even when he knew that Riley could just break his heart further and then put it through a blender.
So, inconclusion, I really loved it. Brilliant piece of work.

xxx

This made my day.
I swear.
I'm ill, and have nothing better to do but read stories. x]
I'm going to miss these two :333
<33333

its ending?
i loves this!

Update! Update! Update! ...Please? =3

Wow Riley. U needed mr. lloyd to give u that plan? U amaze me child.....

im commenting im commentng and i still love it so....last chap? please???

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Gooooooooo Riley goooooooooooo.

I'm kind of nervous to see what happens with him going to New York, I just want everything between them to turn out okay. -fingers crossed-
I'll be sad when this is over though )':

.....wow, Riely. Really? You really hadn't thought of that?
Lah-duh. This Lloyd guy is genius.
I hope he passed his exams though.
And I'm actually really glad about how things with Stu ended.

As I said, I really do prefer your chaptered stories.
This is so sweet and the plot line seems plausible, which really is a great plus.
I like your writing style and how you build up to things. Keep up the good work!

Only 1 or 2 chapters left :( I can't wait to see what happens and if Matty listens. Update soon!