Man Overboard - Comments

So I just read the prequel and the chapters of this one, and I absolutely love it. I mean, really really love it. I couldn't stop reading, and then I got to the last chapter and sort of... died a little? No, okay... I'm totally exaggerating, but still... I wish there had been more to read. So, I hope you find your way back to this story soon. It's amazing and you're a really great author. :)

If you update this i will love you forever

I read the prequel, it was awesome. Ive read all of this one and Im hungry for more! your writing is awesome, and Im totally subscribing to this and am deffinately going to have to check out your other stories. (:

Hiatus? =/ but.... it's so good.

This story is superb! It's much better than the prequel; your writing has developed immensely. Not to say that the prequel was bad; I quite enjoy the emotions and personalities you give the boys. I can't wait to read more :) and Up All Night is a beautiful song!

Okay, Up All Night - too good. and Travis, quit barging in like that, sheesh.

Aah Tom can't avoid Mark forever! And Yes Up All Night is amazing :)

Oh good, Mark won't die! I hope Mark won't be too mad at Tom for bringing up his concussion! He was just trying to help. And I was just wondering if you had any plans to bring up Tom's anorexia. Just wondering. Another great update! Can't wait to read more!!

mmmmm Mark. <3 So sexy. Anyway, keep em' coming!

You know, I hate it when I think I commented but I didn't.
|: There is obviously something wrong with me.
Ok, so, I was trying to hold in a scream when Mark blacked out.
I was like, "WHAT. WHAAAAAT. No, that's not how this is supposed to happen!"
& of course, I was hoping he wouldn't have some near death experience.
Because that would really be something.
(Then I'd have a reason to throw virtual tomatoes at you. Just kidding!)

Anyway, I liked how lucid his thoughts were during the black out.
He was incoherent in every other way but in his thoughts.
I've experienced out-of-body type phenomena, and heard of it too,
so I think if you wrote any further I'd get chills down my spine.

I also like how it was strictly a moment between Mark & Tom too.
I mean, not that Travis or anyone else is less important.
But what he was saying to comfort him was frenetic and really shows
more of the dynamics of their friendship. ♥ That was really sweet.

WHAT JUST HAPPENED!?!?!?!?!?!?! AHHH!!! I need to know more!!!!!!

gaaaah I need to know what happened.

Wow I think this is one of my favourite stories ever so far (including the prequel) it's amazing :)

OH NO! WHAT'S WRONG WITH MARK!?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?

Oh and here's the actual comment I forgot to write, after watching the video I deffinately think that chapter was amazing. You did a really good job once again showing how good of friends the guys all are :)Keep up the good work!

That video was adorable :)

Please Please update soon.
This is the only Blink-182 story that I <3.
x

I wonder what Mark's dream says about what will happen next.
o: I seriously love this story; it flows so well and at the right pace.
& everything makes sense. There wasn't a moment where I was
reading it and was confused or thought it was unrealistic.

Anyway, this made my day way better than it already was. <3

Also. . .pissy Mark is still adorable. Travis trying to comfort him was
unexpected actually because I thought Tom would attempt to barge in.
Well, there's always the next chapter for that. (;

Yes it does in fact make up knowing that MArk's not being a butt face and says he isn't mad at Tom. It makes me a happy kangaroo.

Aww Mark's being all sad and confused, I just wanna hug him. (and you should probably know you made MY day by updating. so thank you:))