i dig that sleeping bag xD and that break up was unexpectingly sudden O.o but other than than wtf moment great i love it, can't wait for the 2nd one. XD
Aww- not the worst ending ever but I really expected more!!! I mean, you have to write more! Now!
Ok short chapter notes: 2- dead link 0- dead link 13-starbucks in forks? 19- Rosalie and Jeremy? It's Marcum, isn't it?
I didn't feel like there was enough of Carlisle's character and their love but the parts with the other Cullens more than made up for it. What happened to Esme breezing by? Sequel? Michael's a douchebag. WANT. MORE!