Surreal - Comments

i dont like jared. i've decided. and i think zeke and rayne should get daisy out of there. cause t here are better ways of rebelling and living than life than living in some pot houseand being felt up by drunken creeps haha

I really liked this, you should update some more. I'm kind of a road trip junky, so I would prolly also just randomly get in a car with two people id never met and drive away...that makes me sound like such a kidnapping risk...dear god... but anyway, awesome story please continue :)

So I think this is a reallllly cute story! It just needs a bit of work. I think that maybe you should add some more detail to it, and make the chapters longer; people like seeing that they have long chapters to read! I know I do! But all in all, it's a good idea, and I like how she's so innocent:)

THAT WAS SO MEAN !!! continnnnueeeeeeeeee :)

haha the meg thing was funny :)

i reallllllly like this :D