Avoid All Entanglements - Comments

I feel like something is very messed up in the world of Tyler and Riley. Something involving her english sub.
I don't see why Tyler doesn't notice that Riley's trying to keep Spencer out.

Poor Tyler. It's so hard to remember that sometimes people would be better off without you trying to fix them.

Hm.
Riley is definitely a case. Very hard to figure out. And I think Tyler . . . I don't know. Too sweet? He's strange, somehow.
And, in this chapter more than the others, I have all these questions. What is up with Tyler and Riley? What's so weird that Riley would warn her against hanging out with them? And when will her mom get better? And how is it that it's so obvious that Spencer is in need of help, but she can lie to herself and say she's not?
I love this story. :]

Oh my god. I don't see why freaking Riley has to be such a scumbag towards Spencer. Tyler is a big boy, he can take care of himself. x

I like it. (: I think Tyler telling her about the sub living in her house was slightly awkward, unless there's like a point to that. But anyways I can't wait until the next chapter, to finally see her open up to Tyler. (:

I think it's the fact that the sub is giving them something that is very significant but you didn specify if that was an assignment given from the teacher to his students?
or
the fact Tyler said some things about the sub that's awkward?

I really think you did a good job!

Man, I feel so sad for Sara=( AND Spencer. Aww.

her death was very sad. /:

WOW, about her sister's death. That's really sad. Did they ever find out who did that to Sara? I hope there is more Tyler in the next chapter... He's really amazing. :) Can't wait for more.

please write more. this is infuriating! his is the first email subscription I've gottenin a week! btw, I love your story. continue it ! I wanna know where Riley went with Sasha. Tyler sounds so cute :3

Riley is really protective of Tyler but really douche-baggy about it... He could at least give her a chance. Anyways, I loved this chapter. (: I can't wait to find out the exact cause of her sister's death & to see her and Tyler's relationship develop. Can't wait for more.

Can't wait for more (:

Nice chapter. :'( Spencer must miss her sister and the track field so much.

Really good.

When are you going to update again? It was kind of a filler chapter lol

I can so relate to that story right now. Love it!

*subscribes* :D

Wow, all that I can say is that you've got me hooked on this story so far, it's different, although it feels like yours writing in a very mysterious way and lonely I can familiarize with it. I hope her and Tyler become really good friends and help her come out of her shell. Update soon, honey<3

Ah. Starting comments is always so awkward. But I really like the layout! It has like a warm, autumn-y feeling to me with the colours.
I really like this, though. I haven't ever moved but I feel like a lot of people could relate to the awkward new-kid feeling she has. I mean, I don't blame her for wanting to at least seem normal, I'm sure a lot of people have that feeling. And I really love the whole dynamic wiu the family. A lot of people just forget about parents, but I think hers really have an impact on her. I'm really wondering what happened to her mom. She seems so... distant, like she's not a part of the family anymore. I don't know what it is yet, but I'm thinking that her dad cheated or something like that.
I also can relate to her that I'm terrified of being alone too. They both have real fears and I really like that about them.
So far my favourite has got to be Tyler, but that's just because I'm usually drawn to the more outgoing type. He's really nice and yeah, aha, I like him. Riley's alright, I mean he seems really closed off but I have a feeling he's going to play a big part in this. And he's got that sort of mysterious thing that makes me wonder about him.
Other than a few mistakes here and there with words, I think this is really great and I'm totally subscribing! :D

Really good.
Update soon? :]

This sounds pretty good :), love to see more =)

Looking forward to more :)