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  • MANDYMURDERS

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    @ ebonygrohl
    Thankyou so much :D I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^
    April 20th, 2014 at 05:23pm
  • ebonygrohl

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    You're a wonderful writer. I loved this story :3
    April 18th, 2014 at 02:11am
  • Jody!

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    I absolutely love this story!! I was seriously bawling my eyes out towards the last page. Great job! =)
    June 20th, 2013 at 05:54am
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    Awww I cried at the end of this. You're a fantastic writer- great work!!!
    January 19th, 2012 at 01:58am
  • Linzee_Gee

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    easily the best story ive read on this site. I cried like a baby at the end :( i loved this story!!
    August 23rd, 2011 at 08:24pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    So I suck majorly for getting so behind with this...but I'm finally all caught up, and I loved it hun! Seriously I cried so hard at the end, but it was so good! I am really sad that it's over though...
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:53pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    I loved the story sooo much, even if the end did make me really, REALLY sad :S Poor Jimmy, and Hillary :( At least Jimmy is with Leana now 0:)
    August 17th, 2011 at 04:17pm
  • shasha24

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    One of the best stories EVER. No more words needed.
    August 17th, 2011 at 07:25am
  • mistery gurl

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    perfect ending :)
    cant believe its over thou! ima miss it!!!! let me know when u next post a new story coz i wanna read it! loved both stories thou!
    August 17th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • KellShadows

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    =( It's over!! I loved reading the stories! =)
    August 17th, 2011 at 01:41am
  • Aightball

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    ='( It's over?

    But it was a very fitting ending. I think, though they weren't there in body, Jimmy and Leana were there in spirit and are very proud parents. Hiliari and Devin are going to go far, I think, and I know Jimmy and Le will be there all the way.

    I loved both stories! I'm a Jimmy girl, so any story about Jimmy always gets at least a look from me; both of these drew me in and kept me on the edge of my seat throughout, which is hard to do sometimes. I think you did a great job and I can't wait to see what other stories you have =).
    August 17th, 2011 at 01:21am
  • palazzbm

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    I loved this story. I fell in love with adolescent and mature. Thanks for writing the story. :)
    August 17th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • shasha24

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    These last two chapters had me crying like a baby. But all the same they were amazing.
    August 16th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • palazzbm

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    I'm not going to lie, I cried when I read this. My sister was just looking at me like 'what the hell are you crying about?' Loved the update. :)
    August 16th, 2011 at 04:32pm
  • mistery gurl

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    loved it!!!
    August 16th, 2011 at 07:41am
  • Aightball

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    HE DIED???? ='( It's not fair to make me want to cry!!

    I wanted him to be there so badly for her wedding, but some things just aren't meant to be. I'm glad she and Devin can be happy together, though, and I'm sure Jimmy is at peace, at least. I do hope the final chapter is happier...
    August 16th, 2011 at 06:22am
  • mistery gurl

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    wow. its to close to home, i cried like a baby, i honestly felt like i was in that room with them all. you have so much talent!
    August 16th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • foreveryoung14

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    Man I'm almost in tears here. I'm only holding them in because my entire family is watching me. I can't wait to read the end:)
    August 16th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • palazzbm

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    I can't imagine going through this. Well, it did happen to me when I was seven with my uncle, but I was too young to understand anything and he died of some weird disease. That's not the point, but I don't care. I typed it anyway. This made me tear up. I bet that I'll be crying my eyes out while reading the last two chapters. Loved the update!
    August 16th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • Vicious Little Lies

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    :'( Jimmy... I can't believe this story is going to be over in like 3 chapters!?
    August 16th, 2011 at 01:03am