Forbidden Attraction - Comments

@ Defying Failure
Hey, thank you for your comment, I was very young when I wrote this story and I realise myself now that it is very flawed! Hahaha!
If I manage to get back into writing I will try to rectify these problems :)

Just read it, confused though.
In the beginning she says she hates shopping but in chapter 44 she says she loves it? Like
I get attitudes can change and all, but there wasn't even a subtle hint to what could've changed it.

I stumbled upon this back in June and read it during my tech class when I was supposed to be doing work hahaha but it was just that good! I didn't want to comment until I was done reading though, so I remembered the story again and came back to it!
This was AMAZING! I love MCR so much, and this story was just incredible, I loved every part of it!!!! You're a very talented writer :)
AND NOW I'M EXCITED TO READ THE SEQUEL!!!!! :D
Anywhoo, I loved this, and I love Gerard <3
*hugs*

IT'S OVER! But thats okay, cuz theres that SEQUEL! :D Woot, woot! Can't wait, great story, love you! <3

wow
I'm nearly crying over your tory again.
Cant wait to read the sequeal. :)

I actually love the ending. I was expecting the dramatic "I'm pregnant" or something. Bnd as great as that can be, it was really nice to end it on a happy note before things turn dramatic in the sequel (I'm expecting, I haven't had a chance to read the first couple of chapters yet)

So yeah, thank you so much for writing this and I'm off to read the sequel now :)

The page for the sequel is up...it's called A Trail Of Destruction go and subscribe :D

I liked the way you ended it :D Can't wait for the sequel

-_-
imma shank you with my non-exsistant dick...
Really?
Just... Uh...
How did I see that coming?

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG SEQUAL NOW!!!!! Post the link up so we know what its gna be called! :DDD

I've already written my ending...but reading these comments are making me want to change it because currently the last words haven't been suggested...but I may tweak the ending a little.

as awesome as ever! :D

NowCMOS...
What the words better be is...
I'm pregnant.
;)

Better not be I don't love you or I'm getting a band together... Cause yea...
Oh and yea that pretty much is how a prom in america is.

Do you mean tomorrow is the last chapter of this story? OMG u shud soooo do a sequal if it is!

So cute! And afro-man won, good for him! Haha.

So "I hate you" aren't the last words? Thank god. What are they then? "I'm pregnant" ? Hmm, so many dramatic possibilities. Can't wait :D

Wooops
Accidentally got up two :P XD

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!
THE NEW CHAPTERS ARE MUY AWESOME!!! :D
I freaking love the story, I will most defs be reading the sequal!
-Mai

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!
THE NEW CHAPTERS ARE MUY AWESOME!!! :D
I freaking love the story, I will most defs be reading the sequal!
-Mai

omg good chapter ! but short :( but i still loved it :) update soon please .