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This was incredibly beautiful. Very simple but elegant. It flowed and read almost more like a poem than a story and your imagery and descriptions were just beautiful. I truly don't have even one critique or correction for this; it's perfection.

oh wow, this is brilliant. i love the way this was written. i can't even begin to describe how much i like this. the way its you and then him for everyone stanza of sort is really nice. its very cute but more than that, its very well-written and so wonderful

That's adorable! :)