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  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Haha thanks!!(:
    June 3rd, 2011 at 03:41am
  • Katiemacx14

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    I'm not very good with comments, but this is so good! Keep it up:)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 02:30am
  • anders.

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    June 3rd, 2011 at 12:37am
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    haha thanks :) some person gave me some pretty good ideas<3
    June 2nd, 2011 at 10:50pm
  • gbkBTS

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    "Maybe because it’s my choice, not yours and I chose him." <-- First of all, that was like the cutest thing ever.

    The conversation with Krista and Peter was very believable. I didn't even see it coming!

    And the fight was pretty intense. That's all I have to say.

    In my opinion, that was a good chapter overall :)
    June 2nd, 2011 at 10:41pm
  • anders.

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    I think it should be okay.
    I mean... nothing bad's really happened.
    But.
    Yanno.
    You never know. /:

    I would like to cowrite with you,
    but I'm so caught up with so many stories.
    I wish I could,
    but I can't. Sorry. D:
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:05pm
  • Let_It_Roll

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    I think the trip should go pretty smoothly. It just seems to me that they need a few chapters of happy. Maybe you could add a teeny bit of drama. But drama that they get past quickly to reinforce and show how much they care about each other? Maybe his family that they're going to visit don't like his relationship? I don't know...that's just my opinion and ideas. I'll be quiet now :)
    May 31st, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • anders.

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    Awe.
    It was a cute filler though :33
    May 19th, 2011 at 10:52pm
  • notinuse.

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    Its cute :3
    May 19th, 2011 at 10:39am
  • anders.

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    Aweee. :D
    I love it.
    Geeze. I hate it when parents totally shun their kids too.
    That's a good thing that they didn't here. :]
    <3
    May 15th, 2011 at 11:32pm
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Haha yes :) I will tomorrow once I get home! Thank you for reading<3
    May 14th, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Remembering_Sunday

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    OMG!!!!!! IT'S AMAZING!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! Update please? xxxxx
    May 13th, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    Yes<3 had to add it in there. :)
    May 11th, 2011 at 03:38am
  • anders.

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    Jack and his Home Alone movie (;
    May 11th, 2011 at 02:31am
  • anders.

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    Aweeeeee :33333
    <3
    May 10th, 2011 at 09:09pm
  • anders.

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    Aweeeeee Alex is so adorable :3333
    May 6th, 2011 at 02:56am
  • anders.

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    Awh. Poor Alex :(
    April 28th, 2011 at 09:36pm
  • Captain Steve Rogers

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    haha, im just starting out. itll be a bit shitty. but i like the honesty<3
    April 28th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • anders.

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    Seems a bit vague, but I'm interested nevertheless. :]
    April 28th, 2011 at 02:35am