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  • MyBlackDahlia

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    ...This... is amazing. Really. You're a great author, and you should get your work published.
    I'd definitely buy it.
    March 31st, 2012 at 11:58am
  • Embracing the Sun

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    Great job, again. I might just worship your writing style. Or not. These chapters are so short (well, not too short), yet they explain so much and leave me satisfied in the end. Can't wait for more!
    June 17th, 2011 at 07:01am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    This is really good :) I love the main girl.
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:14am
  • Autumnazing

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    Believe me when I say that I am the pickiest reader on Mibba. Grammar, layouts, and an overall interesting storyline is crucial to me. Reading your story? All I can say is... Simply, superb. Amazing, and I can't wait to read more. Most definitely subbing.
    June 11th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • Embracing the Sun

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    So amazing I don't want to stop reading. Unfortunately, I have come to the end of Chapter 3 and their are 3 chapters in total so far. The narrative is so... Observant and smart and explains so well that even if this story didn't have dialogue, I would still read it. Thankfully, it does. Please continue. Really. Continue.
    May 26th, 2011 at 02:41am