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  • in gold blood.

    in gold blood. (100)

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    That was so beautifully written,
    it's heartbreaking to have Ray so angry with himself for not trying harder,
    and all of him pent up guilt.
    It's fantastic. :)]/size]
    August 23rd, 2011 at 10:53am
  • Mr. Darcy

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    This is so sad. :P
    But I love the way you done it in his view and showed how it affected the others.
    You're an awesome writer! :)
    May 2nd, 2011 at 01:22am
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