Dying Innocence - Comments

Can I say this is awesome?

Still reading, glad you updated :)
Missed this story!

This is amazing ;)

Muahahaha. Amazing. I hope the marks on Brandon are worse, and he has to reveal himself to Mark, and then he lies and says Andrew is his boyfriend to hide the shameful fact of his prostitution, and then Andrew and Brandon kiss, and then they get married and have a bunch of gaybies.

WRONG. His name is Andrew. Ten thousand points taken from Hufflepuff.

Now you need to update for redemption in the sake of Hufflepuff. Remember, the House Cup is counting on YOU.

My my my.

:D Bitch, I don't take money if you're penis hasn't been inside of me at least once today. At the least.

Anyway, I really do love it. Your linguistic skills are simply chimerical. I can't wait for the next update. And when he said he was dirty, I just imagined him covered in drosophila and dirt. Hee...

(By the way, were you surprised that I knew the meaning of the words chimerical and drosophila? Don't be, babe. Don't be.)

D": This chapter reminds me of my old story. In mine a girl got raped too. Poor Amy!

The mom? Yeah, can I stab her in the facial regions a couple times if ya don't mind?

moremoremore. :D
I love it. c:

=] Epic. How dare that hoe scare away good work! That bitch....anyway, I love this so! XD

I lovvvvvvveeeeee thissss storyyy plzzzzz plzzzzz update soooooon

OMG WRITE MORE!! xDD I'm so curious at happens next! xDD

:D HOW IS THEIR NO COMMENTS?! I fucking love this! Yay for Jack the Riper! I love his wikipedia page.....

Your comment cherry has officially been popped! =]