Learning to Love - Comments

someguy388 (100)

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Woooooooooooo, awesome story!

July 12th, 2008 at 02:29pm

Glassified (100)

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Hey!

I really like this so far, and the descriptions great and so was your poem ^_^

Can't wait to read more.

Gems xx

July 11th, 2008 at 06:14pm

DarkAngel007 (100)

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I like this story!
Mostly because it's original fiction, which I have been dying to find, but I like your idea. I don't usually enjoy POV switches, but I'm a fan of the dramatic irony in this case.
Keep it coming, if you please!
~ Audra

March 2nd, 2008 at 05:13pm

The Lovecraft (500)

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I'm sorry I didn't read this as soon as you put up the second chapter!
I finally got the chance to do so, though, and I loved the second chapter!
Shawn's such an awesome rebel, :lmfao:.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

February 16th, 2008 at 01:38pm