On Frail Wings of Vanity and Wax - Comments

*stops sharpening a knife and throws it in the corner*

Oh. I see now how Ash feels and now I kinda feel bad for calling him out but he still deserves it >.>. He needs to stop pressuring Andy really. And he needs to realize that being with Andy will mean that they can both learn from the other. But maybe Ash is right. Maybe all that will happen is a broken boy who has been poisoned and left for death.

Beautiful chapter and I hope we did not burden you into writing just because we wanted it. That would just not be right :(.

Yes! I wanna see what Ashley fucking Purdy's opinion is on this fucking situation >.>. So now he holds Andy. Jerk. Awesome awesome chapter! :)).

Update again soon please! :)

Errors:

My breath caught in my throat as got to my knees 'as I go to my knees'

I don't have that much of a gag reflux. Reflux? I think it should be 'reflex'

drowning in all the cum your fucking swallow" 'you' not 'your'

"Whatever Good" Should that be 'God' not good?

That fucking son of a bitch. How the fuck could you force Andy do suck your fucking dick and force him to swallow and leave him like that?! Oh, I so fucking want to kick you in the balls and make sure that nothing comes out of that disgusting thing of yours ever again! And how the Hell does Ricky feel what Andy does? Chris probably does the same to him. Those fucking cheap ass basterds >.>. *breathes in deeply*

I had a moment sorry. And I am not too sure about Ricky. He could be legit or he could just be lying and then Andy tells him shit about Ash and then he goes and tells Chris and then everyone fucking knows. Not good at all really for that one to happen. Beautiful chapter <333.

Update soon please?! :)

Errors:

i want to be his one and only The 'i' should be capitalized.

His touch was electrifying and his hands weren't shaking like mine, they were skilled, they knew what they were doing. This is like a run-off sentence to me. In my opinion, I would change it to 'His touch was electrifying and his hands weren't shaking like mine. They were skilled and knew what they were doing'

That was a really good update :)). I hate how Ashley is all about sex. He is missing out on what could be his true love by just focusing on the one thing he knows best instead of venturing to the other side and learn about love. I feel bad for Andy being dragged into this. This is going to kill him :((. Beautiful chapter <333.

Update tonight again please!!!!
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I love this story!

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Awesome chapter!

Can't wait for the next one!

Yay Ashley apologised!

Oh and I -love- all your other stories they are amazing!

You're a really awesome writer! :)

Yay first comment! haha

Loving the story so far!

Can't wait for the next update!

Poor Andy :(