Temptation into Lust - Comments

Your sex scene was immense and good luck in my comp x

I read it all and enjoyed it loads! well done!

I love it (: well, I've only read the first chapter... just one thing the layout is hurting my eyes because the writing is so small...... ill read the next chapters soon.. Good Luck (: x

I'm not really into femmeslash etc, but this is a good story. I loved the background info and the small conflict in the end. For being your first girl/girl story, you've done a great job. I can't wait for the next part :D