Stoplight Eyes - Comments

  • floraXXXfauna

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    I loved this! The whole concept of the spotlight eyes and that their first kiss and the 'just go'. Amazing. your a beautiful writer :)
    June 14th, 2011 at 02:04pm
  • KyLilly_Kid

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    Loved. This.

    I don't think I can add anything more to the comments above ^^ since they all pretty much say what I was going to...

    ..I'm so glad you went for this and wrote this.
    May 15th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • mauricewashere

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    owwwww my eyes. i should really put my contacts in.
    but that was adorable :) i liked that line raven-feather hair... that was cool. and i liked the stoplight eyes thing. and the converse line before they kissed. and a bajillion other things. i loved this :)
    May 14th, 2011 at 06:22pm
  • itwaspure

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    Well, I'm not usually into Frerards, but since you wrote it, and I love your writing, I thought I'd check it out.... And now I'm glad I did =] it was really good! Frankie and Gerard are just so... Adorable ^_^
    May 13th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • skeletonletters.

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    <3 Ugh, yes. First comment.
    That was ... beautiful, I'm really proud of you for totally taking the plunge there.
    Stoplight Eyes is a wonderful title, and I loved it sooo much.
    And the last part about the 'just go' is ... amazing.
    Like, great.
    Totally great.
    I'm actually so happy that you did this and ... ergghh, you're such a wonderful girl.
    I am totally adopting you as my Mibba little sister.
    -hugs-
    Ruv you, bb.
    May 13th, 2011 at 12:08am