This is very sweet and simple which I like. The lyrics are very nice and the story is well written though I did notice one mistake I'd like to point out. But why hide should a beautiful man hide such a beautiful talent. I had to read that a time or two to get what word was added in there. It should be But why should a beautiful man hide such a beautiful talent. So the mistake wasn't too bad and I didn't really dwell on it. Overall, the story has a very interesting feel to it with how you take it through reality, a small, small dream, and reality again though that single dream gives a person so much detail which makes it all very well done.
June 4th, 2011 at 05:52pm
