Life on Point - Comments

For comment swap] I just read your story in one day and I loved it I find it very sad that Libby couldn't find the courage to allow the relationship to become public. No matter what a person sexuality I'd they should be able to be themselves with out being judged. At the end when she passed away you sort of gave the memo you don't know what you got til it's gone and I loved it. Your description of their love and the struggle they go through is great. I also like how you are on que about how balerInas have to go through so much and be so comitted to dancing

I think writing stories about actions like this, ballet, gymnastics, etc, is pretty difficult because its hard to describe the actions they're doing to give the correct visual for the reader but I do think you achieved that just fine. There's this one line I searched for the dark haired, green eyed, pale skinned... I really think you only need one of those because you don't want to describe in on whole like that, so maybe just opt for dark haired and that's it. Otherwise, great beginning, I'm sure the rest of this story is as good.

This story is beautifully written. Anything that evokes emotion from me is a great story. Libby was irritating at times, but I understood the way she felt and why she felt it. Sophia was my favorite character over all. I love that she came to terms with what happened to Libby. She accepted it. I cried horribly when I read the last chapter. I even asked why did she have to die. But reading what Sophia's thoughts on Libby's death made me feel better inside, and it is such a beautiful story. You did an excellent job. I really enjoyed the story. It as fantastic.

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Hey so I just wanted to point out a small obvious typo in the summary "was madly in love with a girl" no period. The story is written beautifully nice varied language. Have a very lovely day xoxo lisa-marie

Wow this was great!

Thank you. I had written like 4 chapters before the end but it didn't feel right so I changed it. Thanks for your lovely comments :) xx

Oh my GOD. This ending is so beautiful. So sad, but so beautiful. I loved the story from beginning to end ^_^ it made me cry so much lol

The new chapter is great. <3

That last part made me cry too x'D Cause oh my god "You make me feel like i'm dancing" Is so fucking sweet ughhh i love this story.
I love this chapter too.
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I love the update, it is so sweet. This made me so happy, and so sad. Anorexia is awful, an it makes me want to cry haha. But I love that they are back together :D

Great minds think alike? Haha, I'm writing a femmeslash/dancer story too.
But I love your nuances, plot. :)

This is so good but so sad 3":

The new chapter made me cry v.V it was so good, please write more.

Haha...I know, I was even cross with myself for writing the last chapter :)
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AGHHH SHE NEEDS TO CHOOSE SOPHIA!!!!!!!!!! </3
LOVE IT MY HEART LEAPED WHEN IT SHOWED UP IN MY EMAIL
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Very well written. Love the story line, so romantic. Update soon, please :)

Chapter nine, when I read it, it was like I was high or something, the words swirled around me, It was poetic, and amazing. I love it. MORE! <3

Ah thank you :) I stopped writing it cus I thought nobody was interested but will deffinitely post more as soon as I can. Thanks xx

PLEASE WRITE MORE OMG I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH!!!

This story is amazing. I absolutely love it. <3